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It seems the stories we’re writing and editing are being well received. A lot of them have been sitting on my hard drive for over ten years. Look at Them is one I wrote a loooong time ago, and Stargate was an idea I’d had floating around for a while. I always wanted to do a story where James goes back in time, gives them a buttload of tech, and helps them beef up Earth.
The only issue with that one is, once they get all the tech and become overpowered, where do you really go from there? It kind of ends the story before it even gets going.
On another note—if, and I stress if, anyone is interested—I finally pulled my finger out and finished the third chapter of Riders. It will conclude the story. As with the others, the biggest challenge was the plot, but this chapter ties everything up in a neat little bow.
God. Imagine riding toothless, while Nico Parker is straddling you from behind, her firm titties pressing into your back, her wet cunt, grinding you while she clings to you, desperate not to fall off. oO Fuck hiccup you lucky bastard, I see why they aged her up.
I’ve sent a few stories to my editor to rip and tear through for me. So far, he’s edited Silo, Vampire, Angel, and Spotted a Burning Wagon in the Distance. Vampire is the first, so it gets to be posted first—it should be submitted sometime today, assuming no last-minute adjustments.
Personally, I think his editing has made a huge difference to the overall tone, pacing, and prose of the story. It feels sharper, cleaner—more like what I envisioned all those years ago. I hope you like it as much as I liked writing it—and he liked editing it. This was definitely one of my favourites, and one I wrote over ten years ago
Aye, a reader pointed out that I can contact the author, I didn't see that before. I'm not removing the review, as you know I post all of my reviews on here. But I have contacted him and sent him a message. I wish him the best!
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