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The banana pudding is in the fridge firming up. The excess pudding is in the fridge as well and I think I may have to share both of them with my family. I don't really want to share, but there you go.
I am posting two chapters tonight, one for each of the stories that I am maintaining on this site. I think they are pretty good and will add something to the story to help move both of them along. Neither of them is finished, these are just two chapters that I finished a while back and feel good about.
I hope that the authors that I am following will post more of their books tonight. I am thinking about REP, MisguidedChild, Jay Cantrell, Oldwolf, Pars001 (I am talking about S.H.E.I.L.A. and A Guy and His...? stories) and auguy86. I read each of your stories and would say to each of you, please post more. I get joy out of reading your works and I am sure many others do as well.
Thanks and take care everyone. I'll let you know how the pudding turned out.
This one was difficult. I hope it came across as good but writing about the most important night a person's life is quite a challenge. I know from personal experience that the night after getting married can be a tough one. My wife and I were so tired once we got to our bed-n-breakfast we just had enough energy for dinner, a comfortable bath together then a quick sexual encounter to consummate our marriage. We were worn out physically and emotionally so a quickie was all we could manage. I have talked to a few other people in my age group and they reported having a very similar experience. So, instead of that I wanted to write about what it could have been for me and many of my friends. I hope this chapter is enjoyable, as I said, it was a bit of a challenge. Take care.
I got about a whole chapter written yesterday and after a final read through of the next chapter in my married series, i will be posting it by Friday. So far I feel really good about this chapter and story. It really gives me a chance to work on my romance skill. Which I have found out, i don't have one. Ask my spouse. Ha ha ha.
Later
Married at First Fuck, the reception chapter has been submitted for posting. I hope this works out better than the wedding. I don't want to have to write a whole new chapter because I got an idea. Ugh, too much work. Enjoy this chapter. It all comes from the heart, the spleen, maybe even the pancreas. ha ha ha. just not the kidneys or liver.
Oh yes, the struggle is real.
I have been working on my Married story, and I have written a second version of their wedding, now I don't know which version to publish. I suppose I could publish both version and let you all decide which one you like, but I just don't know.
I guess I have seen too many romantic comedies in my lifetime. Which reminds me, Tom Hanks in "You've Got Mail" is a good movie. I don't care what Rotten Tomatoes says about.
Back to writing seeing where my story takes me.
One more thing. I received a email comment from a reader that I would like to address. The email called into question my lead's desire to live in a tiny house. My thinking was that if a person was going to change their lives, really change how they acted and thought about their life, they needed to change their environment. Which includes where they live. This character was living in what many would call the lap of luxury with every known entertainment experience available to him. He had food a plenty. He had his parents who let him do whatever he wanted without restriction. Once his dad talked to him and verbally kicked his butt, he changed. He changed what he did with his time and how he lived. It is my thinking that he built his own tiny home so that the change would be real and tangible. Put everything aside and be a show the world that you are a real man, not a man-child.
Take care I will get the next part of Married posted.
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