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Being a lesbian, my knowledge of heterosexual marriage is limited. I can use my imagination and garner enough understand to write about husbands and wives. I can even write about adultery and be able to show it reasonably. Not being a male doesn't hinder me in writing from a man's point of view, at least not any more than a man writing from a woman's point view is hindered.
That said, writing about the cuckold lifestyle has been an experiment in terror. I have published two or three such stories. Reception of the stories is mixed and partially depends on the what site the reader has used to read the stories. Here at Storiesonline, my work is generally ranked much lower at than at other websites. But to be honest, some of my early works suck no matter where they are read or by who. I haven't taken those stories down, they are there to remind how sorry I was. I still have a long way to go, yes, I do, but I'll get there.
I decided I wanted to write a new cuckold story, which I did, but I wanted it to be more like the real deal is. With that goal in end, I went to website for the lifestyle. I entered one of the chat rooms, with my name and the writer for the handle. I asked if any cuckolds would discuss the lifestyle with me and explain the Mechanics of this strange type of marriage. During the discussions, I guided them to their feelings on it all.
I was shocked and surprised by their openness, the motivations, and the jumbled-up emotions that happen this type of relationship. It's all far more complicated than one might suspect. I'm not sure any story can be all that accurate when you have all of this to contend with. To start with there are three people, three sets of reason, three sets of emotions (and those are mixed feelings all the way around I assure you), and dynamics dictated by the varied needs.
One of the cuckolds I interviewed I asked him to read and rate, my newest offering Candy's Dandy, was to him a dead bang on story for the lifestyle. I'm sure I missed the hot wife and the issues that drive her, as I haven't interviewed any hot wives about the lifestyle yet. And honestly, I don't know that'll I'll delve into either the hot wives' point of view or the bulls.
The scores on this latest story aren't all that good, in fact, they're paltry. That notwithstanding, I stand by my story. If you want to check it out just follow the link below (if it works)
Candy's Dandy
In an email originating at another site I post, one of my regular readers asked me a simple question. "Of all the stories you have written, which is your personal favorite?" While the question might be simple, the answer isn't, at least, not for me. At this site, I have 35 published stories. Some of these stories appear at other websites, and others don't. I have erotica on Amazon that are listed only there. Then again some of stuff is exclusive at other websites and online stores.
In fact, my favorite what? My own favorite story or the one I'm most pleased with reader reaction? Believe it not some of my narratives at other sites have outstanding scores. The same tales here, not so much. The tale I'm most pleased with from an income point of view is another of my favorites.
I told her, "The next story I write is hopefully my favorite. The one I call my favorite, so far, is "In the Arms of the Succubus." The story was written for last year's Literoitca's Halloween contest, while it didn't win, it has a respectable 4.44 out of 5 there and here carries a score of 7.04. I don't know for sure, but I believe it's the highest score I have at this site. On another place where I publish, it carries a 90.3% ranking. If I count the downloads from all the websites I have published In the Arms of the Succubus, it has over 75,000 downloads to date.
None of those reasons make it my favorite. I like it best, so far, because I enjoy reading it. Other writers will understand this, it is one of those stories when I read it, I think, "Wow, I wrote that?"
I do not consider myself a great writer. My stories are too short, my characters are underdeveloped, too many are too violent, and I still struggle with proper grammar. I'm not even confident I'm a good or competent writer. Yes, I know that is an open invitation to get email's that tell me I suck as writer. And that's fine. While you get to read my stories, if you want to, they aren't written for you. I write for me…there are personal reasons I write violent stories. There are reason for every story I write. They are my reasons. I write to get out whatever I need to while I write them.
Most of the time I look at what I write and think, I could have done better. Not always though, some I think, "That's not bad." Then again, ever now and again, I'm really pleased with one of tales. I think to myself, "Hell, yes, I wrote that!"
I don't know if this is a big deal to anyone else or not. It isn't a huge thing to me, but one of life's little irritants. The kind of annoyance like the toothpaste tube that you cannot squeeze the toothpaste out of because of the sucky design. You know what I mean, the past goes down in the tube and not out the hole that is there for it. What if our bowels worked that way? "Holly inability to get any shit out shit, Batman!" Robin said, "Every time I try it goes back up my guts to tummy." Anyway, the having to wait until a story is posted to turn on the comments I find annoying. Maybe, annoying is to strong, bothersome, pestering, or troublesome might be more accurate. Can't we default this setting to allow comments from the get go or make it part of the upload procedure? I forget until 40 people have downloaded it and then I must go in and set it! How about it does anyone else find it a nettlesome chaffing on their back side? I know hardly anyone leaves comments, I still like to read them. Even those short, terse, notes like "Garbage" I have a desire to read! Lest we forget, we want responses from people - even the negative ones. Some really has to hate either the story, or the story teller to take the time to call it Garbage. I at least know they had an emotional response form my writing, and I find that very gratifying.
Cuck, cuck, cuckold, calling all cuck's, here's a story for you and your hot wife too. Just a taste from my newest work, presented with love by me to you!
"I'm going to fuck your wife," he said, his confidence resonated in the tone and timbre of his announcement. "How'd you like it, if I let you watch?"
"What," I said.
"You heard me," he said. "I'm going fuck your wife. I'm willing to let you watch while I do."
I'm trying another cuckold story I hope you like it. Why not check it out at, <ahref="https://storiesonline.net/s/17675/candys-dandy">Candy's Dandy
My new story is a return to a darker adventure in a desperate future. It's filled with villages of women, roaming bands of Man-Creature rapist and some darker loners that do more than ravage their victims. They have a taste for flesh. On top of all that is the Overseers that watch the remnants of humanity tear each other part as a perverse entertainment, a detached voyeurism watching for changes in the Skanks (as they call them). I hope, if you like darker stories, you'll give it a read and let me know what you think.
here it is its called Predator Prey: The Revivification.
With love,
Millie
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