Eddie Davidson: Blog

Would anyone consider writing a short story in the "Homeowner's Association" Universe I created for the story I am presently writing "Homeowner's Association: A Big Deal at Sunny Manor

The first 6 chapters describe the general rules, location, director etc.

It doesn't have to be Sunny Manor. You could create your own fictional clothing-optional/kink friendly community if you feel more comfortable. You could use whatever kinks work for you as well. If you don't like the way I tell try your own.

I am having more fun with the interaction and integration of a new family into the community than I am with just describing rough sex and bondage situations. Granted, I am doing a bit of both. However, just the interplay between the characters has been the most rewarding to write.

It could be a story about another family that moves there for the first time. It might be what happens on Halloween night (So many Slave Leia's going door to door) they don't call it trick or treat, it's just treat.

What about the backstory to one of the background characters? Fawn and Angelica? Bambi? Carlos and his sister Dancer?

It doesn't have have to be canon with my story. Feel free to make up the rules/people that work for your story.

I'd like to see a few if anything as inspiration.

I am *REALLY* happy with the response to Homeowner's Association.

I have published the first 6 chapters which constitute the Tour of the facility. I did my best to really breathe life into these places. I hope I laid a framework that may even inspire other authors to write stories in Sunny Manor. I created a public Universe on SOL for it to add stories anyone else writes.

That being said I am starting the next "Section" of the story which is where the family must decide to stay or go.

Many of you may as you read this think that a clothing optional/kink friendly community is over the top.

In England, they have a TV show on public TV where people get fully naked (no pixels) and choose who they want to date. Just for no real reason other than it is fair at the end of the show the person picking must get naked too.

Sounds impossible to someone who still remember's Janet Jacksons nipple causing a meltdown in America.

In Japan, I am told they have a TV show where female contestants have to guess the dick revealed through various holes is their husband and then make it cum first to win a prize. I don't know if that is porn or real but if I wrote it into the story it would seem over the top.

In many countries they have Naked and Afraid, a man and woman are dropped off naked in the woods. Granted, they pixelate it here in America but they do show butt crack sometimes. (not sure why) - still its a vicarious thrill to watch them huddle together in the rain and the woman is like "My husband is watching this!" and the guy is like "Cool, well I am cold though"

In some Universities in the United States they have an actual nude week every year where the students are encouraged to take classes in the nude. It seems insane but they were streaking on campuses way back in the 70s. When I write a NIS story I always feel like my readers may not believe it so I have to add more plausibility.

If you read the HOA story you may at times wonder how such a place could stand a legal challenge.

First, keep in mind it is in Florida where Crystal Meth is the state bird for some reason and people who aren't driving drunk are issued a ticket. Okay, I am kidding but you know a news story about "Florida Man" is probably going to involve someone's ear or penis getting bitten off, right?

They built way out in the boonies with their own sewage, electric, etc out of county jurisdiction. Also, keep in mind there really are kink friendly clothing optional communities IN Tampa.There was a reality TV show about how many clothing optional communities there were and the real estate agent that caters to them.

I believe within the next decade there will be a BDSM game show on American Television where contestants are hung by their tits and spanked etc to endure punishments and see how long they can stand it for money. There will be a Celeb version where fading stars will come on and sit in electric chairs and get a mild shock for the amusement of the home viewer. I know it sounds crazy but I think its coming.

I am hopeful you will grant me the benefit of the doubt as you read the HOA story.

My main concern is the length of the story. I know some people get intimidated by long stories while others won't bother until it is complete and lengthy because they want an epic.

I also plan to continue the Summer School story. I just needed a refreshing break before I stick a ginger root up Clair's ass like she so richly deserves for all her shenanigans.

I've posted chapter four of Homeowner's Association A Big Deal at Sunny Manor (BDSM). This story follows a BDSM couple when they move into a kink-friendly/clothing optional community in Florida.

I have chapter five and six in the edit process right now. ETA is one a day for them.

The first few chapters set the tone for the story. The story starts to show some of the rules in practice. Every location they visit on the tour is named for a reason.

I wanted Sunny Manor to feel like a tour through Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory only fetish-inspired. Inside the steam-inspired are wonderous surprises to the young man telling the story of things he has never seen or only seen in pictures.

Minerva's Market, DeSade's Pantry, Chez Pichard, all of these places I wanted to feel real to you and seem memorable. I wanted you to smell the smells and feel like this place could exist. There are real clothing optional kink friendly resorts. Caliente is a good example.They like Sunny Manor have legitimate rules and membership agreements that protect them and visitors. It isn't a free-for-all fuck fest.

That being said I wanted Sunny Manor to be more than just Caliente and so I placed it in a remote section of Florida between Land O Lakes and New Port Richey. They have their own garbage, sewage, etc out there so they can avoid dealing with the county, etc.

They keep to themselves, haven't had serious crime in years. Everyone that lives there is affluent and there is a security gate around the permiter that looks like a medieval fortress. It is like that in most nudist resorts. People don't lock their doors because they don't have any place to keep the keys (well they make fobs now but not everyone wears one) and it works just fine.

I've turned on voting because I think at chapter 4 I am ready for that constructive feedback as to whether this is an homage to Mister Archie's "Homeowner's Association" or it is not. I'd like you to give it to chapter six before you expect the real story to emerge though.

I don't have the authority to be a reviewer but I wanted to suggest a good short story for fans of Femdom.

It is a nice short story. I wish it had been longer. I wish it had delved into the wifes motivations. I didn't want her to be a ruthless Dicktatress that is just cruel. I saw in her that she wanted to be strict and at the same time she did feel something for her husband. She wasn't out fucking other dudes/using this as an excuse to go have sex with strangers.

I like that. She wanted to train her husband and instead of bringing home creampies for him to eat, he'd have to eat his own.

That being said, I suggest taking a look at Mike McGiffords Sniffles a New Way of Life.

As an aside, Master McGifford will be making a cameo in Homeowner's Associate a Big Deal At Sunny Manor I am writing. I like to write cameos of people who inspire me into my stories as an homage. If you see yourself reflected there - you'll know why.

I thought that perhaps as I reached 30 chapters people were losing interest.

The readership has dropped from 1,000+ to 400.
Granted there was a short hiatus for a while but few can pump up quality chapters every day or so.

I thought at best what I should do is create a NEW story to continue it.

After receiving several VERY flattering posts from readers who like the work I assure you I will not just tack on a summary ending. I will howevr most likely start a "New" section or story that picks up where it lefts off not to leave you in the dark.

However, as much I love writing in my cousin Clair's head as she is trained - I have to take a little break from the character for a bit for my own sanity.

That being said, I've started the HOA series and am about to post up chapter two. This story starts out slow but please give it at least six chapters before you make a decision about it. The first chapter really helps to put you in Matt's head as he tells the story about how he moves to Sunny Manor: A Kink Friendly Community.

Chapter three is where I think it starts to get good.