Scary leap to ask for opinions on changing the series title from Unleashed to...
(link here: https://storiesonline.net/n/43978/unleashed-a-challenging-day )
Reason: at first, I thought the direction of the story would go towards a single incident where Polana unleashes her desires, but being a pantsy, the character stole the story and made it go in a different direction and then other stories surfaced concerning the main character and sub-characters where Unleashed seemed less and less representative of the multiple story series. So, since I am only partially through the first story, I figured I would change the overall series title.
Thoughts: I liked the simple one-word series title, simple minds, simple thoughts, I guess.
Scary: Will anyone answer??? What's the expression - I looked into the void and nothing stared back - well, I asked for advice from the multitude and nothing came back - sums up my fears.
If you have an opinion, please send a note with your suggestion and thoughts. (including - you're a dumbass, don't change it).
So far, my ideas:
Enhanced - simple, but I think there are already 1.2 billion books with this title
Augmented - I like the idea of hinting at augmented breasts, penises, but seems like only half a title
Amplified - too musical, and I suck at singing
Intensified - I like the idea of the world intensifying around our heroes and their natural abilities getting intensified, but maybe too much of an adjective.
Enlarged - too simple but also too mundane, but I like the sexual overtures and implications.
Unleashed - what I have now seems like the wrong direction.
If you have any other ideas, please send them. If there is nothing else, it will make me feel that someone has read at least part of this.
Note: I didn't think amazing, stupendous, spectacular words would work - Spider-Man already stole them.
Additional Stories (partially written or in final editing - working titles):
Jennifer and Cindy with the Principal (Lesbian with some more backstory)
After School Shopping (a look at the world from a shopping perspective - ie, more public stuff)
Jealous Much (School event)
The Final Fight Begins (Polana graduation test)
Dead Testing Days (Physical Testing for Polana and crew)
The Death of Tyler (and ramifications)
I have a new Job (Polana's new job)
In the Military (Polana gets drafted)
Roshana decides to get Popular (Polana helps Roshana - basically a stroke story)
The Six Soldiers (Polana and five other soldiers on assignment)
Zer and the dog of a boyfriend (Polana's sister)