It took me a while but I finally got around to finishing and posting chapter 23. I think that I have at least a few more chapters to write until it's finished. Some readers have said that they are a bit confused with my changing POV's so I have responded to that and now indicate the different story teller each time there is a change. Please let me know if you like the idea. Also I would appreciate any other comments as I always love hearing from readers. Thanks!