I appreciate Great CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism, in particular spelling errors. akarge sent me numerous corrections, the most serious was that I wrote the first two lines of Chapter two in Third Person, and then reverted to First Person. WOW! I hadn't noticed that in several passes of self-editing!
I was going to wait until at least Monday, or perhaps January 2nd to upload various chapters with corrections. However, this is such a serious error, I am going to fix it in the next couple of hours!
Thanks also to soil4now, ystokes, fisherhunter567, and others for their Constructive criticisms too.