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Wording & gramar errors

rustyken 🚫

I've been working on a story for several months. Since my writing is being done with multiple stops and starts, I've frequently been rereading what has been written. A part of this is driven by a negative review I received after publishing a book that had been on SOL for several years. While I likely won't publish it as a book, I do intend to put it up on SOL when it is complete.

The reason for my note is that some of the errors I've found are shocking. Shocking to the point, that I don't believe I created them. So is it possible that I bumped the keyboard and autocorrect created the error. Recently I've had issues with having my fingers in the correct position on the keyboard. That can lead to some interesting text.

So the purpose of this note is to vent a bit. Thanks for listening. ;-)

Replies: The Outsider Dinsdale Dominions Son jimq2 Grey Wolf

The Outsider 🚫

@rustyken

Unfortunately, as I'm sure you know, even decades later, you or others will continue to find errors...

"How the HELL did I miss THAT?"

Replies: tendertouch REP

tendertouch 🚫

@The Outsider

"How the HELL did I miss THAT?"

Gremlins. As soon as a part of the story is out of sight, they come along and replace 'their' with 'there', remove 'not' in odd places, 'whose' become 'who's', etc... Nope, no way I missed that!

REP 🚫
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@The Outsider

"How the HELL did I miss THAT?"

The problem is how we handle our oversights being pointed out by our readers. All too often, we call our reader a grammar nazi in our minds or, worse yet, in a reply message. Some of us refuse to accept our errors being pointed out to us as constructive criticism when the messages we receive are politely worded.

Replies: The Outsider tendertouch

The Outsider 🚫

@REP

I'm my own worst enemy there... I AM a Grammar Nazi...

Replies: Crumbly Writer

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@The Outsider

I'm fairly pedantic myself, yet even I know better than to attack my fans for offering helpful suggestions, as there's no way that's ever going to work out well. As if any of us need any more 1-votes than we already have.

Plus, it's the most insecure in their own abilities who get the most offended, so throwing a hissy fit only worsens the readers' responses. So, if you don't want upvotes or ANY comments at all, then go ahead and piss in your readers' eye.

tendertouch 🚫

@REP

Some of us refuse to accept our errors being pointed out to us as constructive criticism when the messages we receive are politely worded.

This has always annoyed me. I try to be constructive if I have criticisms, but some authors get incredibly defensive.

Personally, I welcome feedback on my stories — either comments or direct messages. I also try to go back and fix things (though there's so much wrong with my first story that I'd really need to rewrite it, and I haven't got up the gumption to do that yet.)

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The Outsider 🚫

@tendertouch

I USUALLY welcomed recommendations on how to correct and/or improve stories, but that depended on how those recommendations were worded...

Replies: tendertouch

tendertouch 🚫

@The Outsider

Agreed, though I usually try to be polite when I reply (and I try to always reply to reader contacts.)

One reader contacted me and offered to edit one of my stories. Sounds good, so far. Then he said that I had this, that and the other thing wrong, and that I was missing the Oxford commas (see the other thread for my thoughts on that) and I had prepositions at the end of sentences (English isn't a Latinate language, but some people desperately want to structure it that way.) I don't often split infinitives, but I'm sure he would have whined about that, as well.

The kicker was when he told me that if he was editing for me then I would accept all of his edits, because they would be correct. For some odd reason I never got in touch with him again...

Dinsdale 🚫

@rustyken

Like the "gramar" in the title of this thread?

I was looking for an ancient Forum thread a couple of days ago, one of the contributions in that thread was from me and I was surprised to see an obvious - and uncorrected - error in there from all those years ago.
Luckily I can't find the thread now.

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awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dinsdale

Like the "gramar" in the title of this thread?

Is a gramar error when you impregnate your granny?

AJ

Dominions Son 🚫

@rustyken

ou know, even decades later, you or others will continue to find errors...

"How the HELL did I miss THAT?"

I work in IT. I look at code that I wrote 5-10 years ago and think what idiot wrote that, oh that was me. :)

I also had an experience in college, where I spent several days looking for a missing ; in a C++ program. I couldn't find it and I was getting frustrated. I set it aside for a few days, not even thinking about it and as soon as I opened it back up, the spot missing the ; was staring me in the face.

Two possibilities:
1. Perspective, at the time you wrote it, you knew what you intended to write and when you look at it, you mind fills in what you expect rather than what's there. Set it aside long enough for your intentions to fade and your mind no longer covers the errors with your expectations.

2. An increase in skill. If it's been long enough, perhaps your writing skills have improved and the errors standing out to you in what you wrote before are a reflection of that.

Replies: tendertouch TheDarkKnight

tendertouch 🚫

@Dominions Son

I work in IT. I look at code that I wrote 5-10 years ago and think what idiot wrote that, oh that was me. :)

I think every programmer can relate. Not long before I retired I needed to revisit some code I wrote 25 years earlier. Cringe! Though I doubt anything I ever wrote was as bad as some of the things I saw that were written by engineers pretending to be developers — a 3,500 line long switch statement that was the key to an already complex engineering problem?

1. Perspective, at the time you wrote it, you knew what you intended to write and when you look at it, you mind fills in what you expect rather than what's there. Set it aside long enough for your intentions to fade and your mind no longer covers the errors with your expectations.

The part about setting it aside long enough is key here. DAMHIKT.

-tendertouch

TheDarkKnight 🚫

@Dominions Son

I work in IT. I look at code that I wrote 5-10 years ago and think what idiot wrote that, oh that was me. :)

One of the first things I learned in my career in computers is that it's easier to find errors in other programmers code than it is your own. I don't think its an ego thing, just a blind spot, maybe caused by cognitive dissonance.

Whatever the cause, the same thing happens when we are writing. I usually go through 3-4 drafts before I post something, but later on I often find things I missed.

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Dominions Son 🚫

@TheDarkKnight

I don't think its an ego thing, just a blind spot

That's was my point. The human mind is prone to seeing what it expects rather than what is. It's easier to see what is when you don't have expectations for what should be.

jimq2 🚫

@rustyken

At least you were doing your programming on a keyboard. I was programming punchboards to sort punchcards.

Grey Wolf 🚫

@rustyken

I'm highly sympathetic to this topic :)

My current editing cycle is:
1) Write it
2) No sooner than a few months later (with rare exceptions), read and edit.
3) Send it to my editors (one at a time)
4) Once all editors have looked at it, shelve it again as much as possible.
5) Just before publishing, reread again, carefully making updates.
6) Fix the (fortunately, relatively few) reader-spotted issues, if any.

That last pass makes a surprisingly big difference, considering I've read the whole thing at least three times before that.

The exceptions to the model have to do with last-minute additions. Sometimes things pop up and have to go in, and those get less coverage by nature.

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