Reviewed:
I am always hesitant to review an incomplete story. However, I made an exception in this case because it is one of the best things that I've read on SOL in quite some time.
The scenario stands out to me because the author paints word pictures with their use of language. This story is a case lesson in "Show don't Tell".
The pacing is excellent, and not over the top.
It starts with a playful and relatively innocent "Hey, will you rub my feet?" from the younger sister. It escalates from there to mostly teasing -
I am up to chapter four, and so far this is not a hardcore story with a lot of "submission" in the BDSM sense. It's more like "What would you do for a kiss on the head?".
I could very much picture the classic porno scene "I am so embarrassed - I am stuck in the dryer and I can't get out... you can touch my butt if you will help me free myself.."
I am looking forward to more from this author.