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Author's Description:
Young man gets infected by nanites, which give him powers, but change him into a girl.
Size: 2149 KB (400,204 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, BiSexual, Fiction, Crime, Science Fiction, Group Sex, First, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Sex Toys, Squirting

Review by Derek Smith   [other reviews by Derek Smith]

Reviewed:


This is a very well written book, the plot is a joy to any lover of sci-fi and the characters are sufficiently fleshed out to give them a high level of credibility.

Typing is generally accurate but 'Barbie' became 'Bambi' on three or four occasions and in the final personal fitness test, Jennifer completes her sit-ups and moves to push-ups but we are told that she is doing sit-ups! Apologies for writing this here, Mrs. Kay but you have not allowed email contact. I think the book is good enough to deserve corrections.

I suspect that most of the readers will be male and that most of us are not really interested in the amount of detail given when garments are being purchased. The designer, manufacturer, colour, model name, type of fabric will likely be glossed over my a hight percentage of readers.

This book is well worth reading, will provide many hours of entertainment to the reader and probably leave most of us hoping that a sequel is on its way.

Thank you Mrs. Kay, you made a difficult week much easier.

If anyone has read this, I urge you to go and read the book.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
 

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