This is my first attempt at erotica. Strongly influenced by M1ke Hunt, I tried for a humorous story. Most readers thought I fell short. But all of them agreed on one salient point, I had written a hot, hot story. At any rate, Celeste gave me a 9 and that encouraged me to keep writing.
It's not always about why. Sometimes it's just about what. "Your first orgasm hits you hard, and the man behind you holds you up as the kneeling man slides his tongue deep inside your hot slippery wetness."
The first part of the tale already submitted (apologies) which describes how an author is taken in by an all female publishing co. in Miami. They manage him as well as his books. He enjoys domination by each in different ways
A Naomi's Journal Story (15) Naomi gets a visit from her new friend Ruth, who is on her way back to college, and the two go for a spin in Naomi's new car, then take a few more spins of a sexual sort once back home. Illustrated.