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Thanks everyone who rescued this story! It's not going to crash the site evidently but now it has its chance.

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I have 9 votes on a my reposted story Runaways, and it needs 10 to get the average displayed. It's not such a bad story, I don't think, but stuck with the * non-rating which seems to put people off voting and leave it in a doom loop. Would some kind person please read it and vote so the average gets displayed? Whatever you feel. It's a very girl power story even by my standards, and not that short, but might appeal if you're into that. The girls flee, get rescued then gradually take over a family, with sex. Violence tag is the girls being violent :) not victims.

This is about the 6th title of this story, as though I didn't know what I was writing about. Which perhaps I didn't. Previously it was 'girls and animals', things like that, but really it's about values and power, and how two penniless runaways take over a wealthy family with conviction, and sex :)

I found a story on my Drive, that I hadn't published and didn't remember at all (I had a stroke a few years ago and now my memory has weird gaps in it). So I read it as though someone else had written it. I found it very involving, I mean I was gripped! Of course it has my values, tensions that matter to me, and the style was very readable for me. Then I found earlier versions so I knew it was mine.

And now my question is how well my writing style translates for other people. How readable is it? I know a few people skim it, but they might skim every story. It could be a bit polarising, but if you feel like making a comment I would really appreciate it. The name has changed since the initial post, now it's Flight into the Forest.

Perhaps it's time to continue Spinsters in Space. Also a sexier title perhaps. The situation is a remote planet, and the only life is benign plants and our four women with the bodies of small teen girls, who can do genetic engineering in the spaceship they've landed. Story wise, it's a lot of freedom!

They've been thinking about developing another girl, and also giving themselves cocks. They've already increased their sex drive. So, a story, with tension and an ending, that's not tooooo obvious or absurd...

It's a statistical necessity though. It doesn't mean half my readers don't like the story, it's just that once the average score has settled, it doesn't change much. Each new vote could be either the same as the average, or a bit above, or a bit below. Who knows! My reader might have liked it, or not.