Pete Fox: Blog

I finally reposted a reedit of this story that was in my file for a couple of years. My attempt at the first person perspective. Many writers on SOL and other sites go the route of 'true life', this is fantasy but inspired by people I have known. That was a bit uncomfortable. I want to thank aroslav for a quick review of the story and nudge. I am working on a sexy visit to an nudist resort that is sexy but yet still stays true to nudism's values.

I read the Prink Van Winkle story a few weeks ago. I was impressed with the humor and quality of the story from way back in 2006.

Questions came to mind. What if the new detective in the family found out about the incestuous nature of the family. This lead me to over a period of a couple of weeks to write this story. I had Lubrican/Uncle Bobs permission as long as credit given.

I like to use the present then to flash back back and forth. I also like history so I tried to nail down a few others facts and questions about Bobs past.

Like Lubrican / Uncle Bob I will repost chapters if I get feed back to correct errors.

There are 5 chapters plus an Epilog.

Lubrican, the author of the original story and an excellent writer himself, did email me some comments and feedback that helped make this story better, thank you.

I write for fun seeing where the story goes, I am not a grammmer nazi. Enjoy.

Constructive feedback appreciated.