Technocracy: Blog

Item One

I will have to assume that my sarcasm, irony, and satire is falling short of the mark. My nephew did warn me that my humor does not translate. My wife said that only artists can do nuance and hyperbole well. I am not an artist.

alter vs altar

culpable deniability vs plausible

And many other 'error' notifications that I have received in the last several weeks. If you see a blaring error, such as the two examples, it may be intentional. As for the numerous grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, those are (probably) not intentional.

Item Two

I receive about four or five offers per week to edit my shit. I asked in the very beginning and was told that my shit is shit; maybe it was that my crap is crap. Allow my prose to be ugly. Consider it part of the story.

An editor that can answer the question below and qualify the answer, gets the job of proofing my shit. And I have two more piles of shit in the queue. Otherwise, with all due respect to the editors that haven given much effort to help make some good SOL prose, please go away.

[ What does time point to in a black hole? ]

Many fucking thanks to those that let me know I fucked up. Fucking git. After a year you would think I would have figured out how to use fucking git. But it is a non-intuitive piece of shit. Why the fuck the fucking world has migrated to fucking git is beyond my fucking comprehension. But that is what I am using to manage my stuff. Never had these problems with subversion or mercurial.

Chapter Three has been re-posted. Fuck.

Again, it is emphasized that Part 2 is darker than Part 1. Circumnavigate this story if you do not wish to explore the darkness of humanity.

Chapter 19 had too much mindless, extemporaneous babble. Edited the last chapter down to the bare essentials required to tell the story.

Caveat and strong suggestion. Part 2 is dark. Darker than the the darkest evil stuff in Part 1. Don't read it, or deal with a graphic portrayal of how and why most humans suck.

Bugs Bunny: What a maroon.

GnySgt Scott: Too many stupid people. Not nearly enough napalm.

Geez. You people need to get a life. You actually think that I would kill off my main character?