Chapter 3 ended up being a beast! Working with Nemo, I spent a ton of time reworking the chapter to immensely improve it. It went from 15 pages to 60, so over 45 new pages of story! I opted to keep it all contained within chapter 3 with just sub-chapters, so the overall numbering wouldn't change. There are many new scenes within to slow down the pace and temper the experiences Kylie goes through and I'm very happy with how it turned out.
It should pop up soon and I'll get the title changed to signify that it's the new version once it goes live.
As always, I'd love any feedback!
Thanks for reading!