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Lost Story . . do-over? sci-fi? quite recent

ayeupchuck ๐Ÿšซ

read this one quite recently and for some reason completely blanking . . bse perhaps?
Mc young chap in do over, gets his father booted out,(and takes over his construction business, with help from grandfather) and also runs off mums new fella (who in previous life mentally tortured MC). Also some high school/college football and some dom/sub games with neighbours?
Oh! and his former best mate was a date/rape artist with the help of his chemist father!
thanks in advance

ayeupchuck ๐Ÿšซ

@ayeupchuck

bump?

XofDallas ๐Ÿšซ

@ayeupchuck

Getting it Right by G. Younger. Haven't looked it up, can be found here, zBookStore or the river site, don't remember which and doing a quick reply.

doctor_wing_nut ๐Ÿšซ

@XofDallas

It's not Getting It Right, although some of the description does fit. That story was not yet posted when the original post was made (06/21/25).

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@doctor_wing_nut

It's a DoOver, maybe ayeupchuck saw it the first time around.

Replies:   i_like2_sail2
i_like2_sail2 ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

HAHAHA. I see what you did there.

AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@XofDallas

Getting it Right by G. Younger

Are you sure it wasn't 'Getting it Wrong' by the same author at the same locations?

Replies:   jimq2
jimq2 ๐Ÿšซ

@AmigaClone

2 different stories. "Getting it Wrong" is the first of a trilogy, and "Getting it Right" is the second.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer ๐Ÿšซ

@jimq2

So the third is "Getting it Sorta Right" is the last in the series? ;)

Just kidding, I'm familiar with the whole series, as I'm a long-time Younger fan.

Replies:   samuelmichaels
samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@Crumbly Writer

Just kidding, I'm familiar with the whole series, as I'm a long-time Younger fan.

Looks like he posted an update recently; otherwise, you could have complained about not getting any Younger.

Replies:   Nizzgrrl  itsmehonest
Nizzgrrl ๐Ÿšซ

@samuelmichaels

AAGGHHHHHHh!!!!

itsmehonest ๐Ÿšซ
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@samuelmichaels

golf clap

Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@ayeupchuck

Taking a guess at suggestions as I didn't finish reading the stories:
https://storiesonline.net/series/1817/deja-vu has a bad dad and IIRC a bad boyfriend.

https://storiesonline.net/universe/1335/the-road-less-traveled has a bad dad and a good grandfather.

https://storiesonline.net/n/39552/life-s-regrets has a boyfriend that tortured the MC first time around.

burlarr ๐Ÿšซ
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@ayeupchuck

I know it a do over. I also know i read it recently just can't remember name. If it helps the guy gets hit by the boyfriend on purpose to get rid of him.
If I remember correctly he work in a store own by a asian couple and the male owner had a dojo that he eventually takes over.

Replies:   moondog_199  XofDallas
moondog_199 ๐Ÿšซ
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@burlarr

That sounds like Life's Regrets mentioned above.

XofDallas ๐Ÿšซ

@burlarr

Moondog is right, it's Life's Regrets. The protagonist actually arranges to get hit by his mom's boyfriend to get rid of the guy, because in the prior life the boyfriend turned out to be toxic and broke the whole family apart.

Replies:   Radagast
Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@XofDallas

Life's Regrets also has the Asian couple running a store.

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