In The King's Army by Volentrin

Author's Description:
Unfinished
Seventeen year old Devlin Cantor Joins the king's army shortly after the death of his mother. Since he did not get along with his step father or step brother, it seemed the logical thing to do.
Size: 261 KB (50,031 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Fiction

Review by Mythic Shadow   [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]

Reviewed:


In the King's Army is a great fantasy novel, that is sadly left unfinished. I found it to be a great story and very entertaining. It's sad that it never got the ending it deserved, but the chapters written are still worth reading.

On the technical side, I noticed some small mistakes and sometimes the story is a bit more telling than showing. The latter would have made it even more immersive.

The plot is exciting to read, however, and it kept me reading the novel in a single go until I finished all the available chapters.

As for appeal; I'm sucker for a good fantasy story and this is one of the better ones out there. Volentrin had some unique takes on the genre and that's what made it refreshing to read.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
 

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