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I've had another one of my "conceive, write and post a story in a day" spells of creativity.
The result is The Wrong Jake, a story of mistaken identity.
For those who have read Piper's Plan, this story is based on the same street, and in the same park, which just happens to be the street where I live, and the park where I walk my dog when the tide is in. They say write what you know, and I know my street. None of my neighbours appear in the stories, all characters and situations are made up.

I hope you enjoy The Wrong Jake.

I'm guessing some people were never taught manners by their parents, so I'll do it for them.

When sending a DM with grammar and typo corrections, it's polite to start the message with a greeting, something like "hello" or "hey"
Then you say something like "I'm enjoying your story, but I spotted a few typos..."

Then you sign off with, "keep up the good work," or simply "regards or "

Manners cost nothing and make the difference between me reading your message and fixing the errors if I have time, or simply deleting your message.

Regards
Alan

Piper had new neighbours, her mum said they had a boy and a girl.
Piper made herself look special before going to meet them, she planned to seduce the boy.
Then she finds out the boy is only 9.
All is not lost though, the daughter is gorgeous, and the mum is spectacular.
From that moment on, Piper's world view changes immeasurably.

Note, male adult gay sex tags. Bisexuality is a major theme of the story, there is no graphic male gay sex, just brief mentions. I included the tags for those offended, not to attract readers.

Hello again.

I know, you wait ages for a new story, then two arrive within 24 hours.

I've got a week off work, and I've been playing with my new Raspberry Pi 500, which I thin k may make the perfect distraction free writing machine, and it's proved it's worth, a completely new story written from idea to publication in 10 hours.

It's almost a flash story, a romance between widower and daughter, enjoy...

I've just posted a new stand alone story.
I am trying to complete New Home. New Friends, and Pictures of Lucy, but this story appeared in my head practically fully formed after I'd watched a scary movie. I was helpless, I simply had to write it up.
I hope you enjoy it, please send me feedback, I enjoy reading your comments and suggestions.