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My SOL debut erotic novel Taboo Tapas - Savor the Sin has been released on zBookStore. It features new illustrations and a free preview of Taboo Tapas II - Savoring Sofia!
I've completed uploading the edited versions of Chapters 1 through 4 of my story "A Submissive Sibling".
I ended up adding several thousand words to each of them, which does not significantly change the story, but adds more detail and removed a lot of the "tell" and replaced it with "show." There's probably no need to go back and read them again unless you are a big fan of the story. If I had to pick one to tell you to read again, it would be Chapter 4, which features a lot more of the parents.
Thanks to everyone who has read it, and especially to those who have left me feedback.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
I consider myself a new author, having only started to push stuff out over the last few months. I've gotten a lot of good responses about my story "A Submissive Sibling" and I'm very appreciative of that.
I recently pushed Chapter Six up, which ended up being a monster of a chapter. I paid careful attention to the editing on it and I think it ended up being a good chapter. I have the outline done to finish the next two chapters, which will finish the story.
However, since my goal is to eventually offer this for sale as a book on zBookStore, I want to make sure the entire story is as clean and edited as possible. I went back and looked at Chapter One closely, and noticed several instances of "telling" and not "showing". So I gave the chapter a very careful edit and rewrite and it ended up going from 2300 words to over 4,000 words. I also finally came up with a decent illustration for it.
If you've already read Chapter One, don't feel the need to go back. It does add some new material, but doesn't change the basic story. I do think it will read better and make more sense as I also go back and do the same to chapters two through five.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
Was working on my latest chapter this morning and I took an hour long break to fall down the rabbit hole researching prostate massagers. I had no idea there was such a large selection for such a specialized... uh... tool? Don't worry, fearless reader, I'm doing all this work for you so you'll be better informed after reading my next chapter.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
I'm still trying out a few illustrations in some of my new stuff I'm posting here on SOL. My latest chapter of The Submissive Sibling had one illustration which I think turned out well. I added it because I personally found it erotic and thought it added to the story.
Yes, the base image is AI generated, but then I altered it to fit my own desires. I also find the process of creating an illustration like this seems to get my creative juices flowing, so it helps me write better. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the latest chapter and the illustration, but would love to hear from you either way.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
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