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Just submitted my rewrite of my first story. Personally, I think this one is better both in terms of direction and writing
A lot of you reached out to let me know that rewrites are generally accepted here, so long as the original is kept up. That's fine, I think I'll title the new work "I think my boss needs to pee: Rewetting" and keep the other one up for those that have it in their library
Anyone remember the line in Seinfeld "I'm percolating, Jerry. I'm telling you, I have never felt so fertile. I'm mossy, Jerry. My brain is mossy."? I'm feeling that way about writing right now and I'm not sure where it comes from. Anyway, here are some ideas I've got right now. All of them have to do with pee, cuz that's what I'm into:
Howe High story:
-Water pipe breaks and both students and staff have to hold their piss
-A short teacher with nice tits and black hair has to hold it all morning and just makes it
-Bratty student in detention pisses all over the floor
-Cheerleaders trapped on a bus need to pee
Misc:
-Mother and Daughter story where the daughter is going off to college and on the drive up there, both have to piss
-Small town female cop has to pee while sitting at a speedtrap
-Two MILFs have some wine on the back porch and decide to have some pee fun
Let me know if you have any of your own ideas that might fit this if you want. Can't guarantee that I'll do it but it might be nice to add to my idea list. Idk, I kind of want to do a mom-daughter story, so I might do that first. Something about mom needing to pee too is hot.
When I first joined this site, I penned a story called “I Think my Boss Needs to Pee” which if it wasn’t obvious enough by the title is a watersports focused story about a boss and her office mates/colleagues getting in different situations where they had to pee.
The idea was that it would also include of light sex, primary but not limited to lesbianism and generally be a tale of a young entrepreneur trying to make it in life and figuring herself out.
But I only got two chapters in…
So if I were to give it another try, would people be receptive or would is that frowned upon here?
With a new story titled “The piss chronicles of Howe high”. Like all my other works, this series caters to the watersports crowd and features both students and staff in situations where they are in desperate need of a bathroom and need to find some other way to pee…or not.
Unlike my other work on this site, this is an anthology project, so while I might reuse characters from time to time, I intend for most of these stories to be disconnected from each other.
The other thing is I plan on only using female characters. Of course there might be males mentioned but certainly not the focus. I really only want to write what is hot to me and I’m not into dudes, so if that’s what you’re looking for, sorry :(
That being said, since this is an anthology work, I’m totally open to suggestions! If you have your own character or idea, let me know and I might include it! And give you the credit for the idea of course. Just send me a dm or comment here and I’ll be sure to read it.
Lastly, if you have any feedback for me as a writer, let me know! Positive or negative, I’d love to know what I’m doing well or can improve on!
This story is going even longer than I thought.
Not in terms of how long its taken me to actually write it, that much I know, but I mean in terms of story progression. I'm a little worried that I'm going too slow and simultaneously too fast if that makes any sort of sense. Obviously I want it to be clear where the story is going so that it doesn't get boring, but I also want to keep some sort of realism, or at least the allure of it.
This is what I'd love the most feedback on. Is it sill tantalizing? Is it still exciting as to where the story is going?
In addition to your thoughts, I'd love to know your ideas for what the two main characters might get up to or where you think the story is going.
Thanks!
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