I updated the first chapter of The Rat and the Dragon with a disclaimer. There is a warning about the non-con and other triggers. I also put the AI images at the start. Other fixes include chapter 7 with an update to the conversation Draen and Cylthan have. I admit, it was very dry, and I've made it a little more familiar and informal. My idea had been that Draen talks a bit like Data from Star Trek: TNG. No contractions, and very cold and logical. He does, however, see Cylthan as his cub since he's been her adopted father since he was 13 (thus I also fixed his age). This sets her up for being accustomed to a pet name like 'kitten' and- if it isn't obvious already- going to lead straight to her totally loving the idea of 'Daddy Roan.' ("Have mercy on me, Daddy!") I also updated chapter 19 to remove the images from there, and fixed up a couple of spots in Cylthan and Roan's conversation in the cafeteria.
My friend is fighting so hard to get this story changed out of non-con land. Mostly, her gripe is "romanticizing toxic relationships." Thus, I added a small disclaimer for people to not take the story as a guide for a relationship. Seriously, if anyone treats you like Roan treats Cylthan, RUN THE FUCK AWAY. Roan has a redemption arc, and so does Bern (if you think Roan is an ass, we haven't yet seen Bern in any great detail... oof). Roan also ends up with Shidu and Jorsam breathing down his neck over everything he does with Cylthan. It's all fantasy. Most abusers do not change. Don't wait around for it. It won't happen in real life the way it happens in stories. Rape fantasies are okay so long as they stay fantasies. Don't put yourself in that position, it's not as much fun in real life as on paper, I promise you. So, enjoy the fantasy! Roan will repent, and he will explain every thought he was having in those first few chapters before Cylthan will allow herself to fall for him.
Here's a bit of character info. Roan is 6'3" and Cylthan is 6'4". Shidu is 6'6" and can stretch her neck as long as an arm. Jorsam is also 6'4". Meanwhile, Bern is 12' tall. For those who needed the exact measurements.